Wrinkles – I have more than my share.

Daily Prompt


Don’t trace the lines around my eyes
To see what they have seen
Don’t touch the wrinkles on my feet
To be where they have been
Don’t feel the scars upon my flesh
To understand my pain
Look into my heart and know
I’d do it all again

20 thoughts on “Wrinkles – I have more than my share.

  1. mandibelle16

    Beautiful piece, very emotional and sensuous. The brevity works well. Abs message at the end is living without regrets. Awesome.


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  3. Brutus, I just came across this poem as a result of reading your recently posted replies in the Comment section.

    I have taken the liberty of reposting it on my blog. I didn’t want to do the normal reblog as I had several comments I wanted to make about your work. I’m trusting you have no objections, but if you do, please email me and I’ll remove the post or make any changes you request.

    Thanks in advance.


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