Reflection (another bit of borrowed feminism)

Based upon some interest from yesterday I post something from the same source without further comment (I added the picture because everyone likes a picture).

It is, once again, a clearly feminist perspective (not that there’s anything wrong with that!) but a little less confronting than yesterday’s offering I think.

It came to me with no title but ‘Reflection’ seems suitable ….

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Look. Don’t stare

I’m not invisible

But I don’t care

To be an invention

Of desire

Of thoughts that conspire

To recreate

Denigrate 

I am not an image

From a magazine

To be seen

As paper thin

Nothing within

For I am more than skin

Deep. 

So don’t peep

This is not perfection

Nor rejection

So much unknown

Just look

At me

So that you might see

More than your own

Reflection

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Feminist Writing

Feminist poetry. And literature. There seems to be a lot of it out there …. judging by my feed, anyway. (For Christmas gift ideas, look no further than here) …. And it comes across as somehow above criticism – as though the sensitive subject matter places it in a file labelled ‘protected species’.

So when somebody (who chooses to remain nameless) throws one into my inbox I’m not entirely sure how to react (or how not to react).

So I throw it into the air and give it some space without commenting one way or the other ….. allowing others to judge her, but not me.

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Tiptoeing alone

Prone.

God forsaken

Taken for granted

The world a long dark corridor

Nothing more

The eyes of the monster

Messing with light

Undressing me

Why fight?

Caressing me

With a cold hand

And colder heart

Why start

To understand

This dance

No chance

Of escape

When life itself

Is rape.

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More bad poetry

Fresh from discussing bad poetry with a friend (there is a mountain of it out there) I add more of my own to that mountain in response to Sammi.

It’s bad (worse than normal, even) but it is 66 words, as required.

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Wish you were here

So unclear

Where do we stand together?

One-night stand

I understand

Can it be forever?

You alone?

Should I phone?

Rather than a letter?

Is it too late

To communicate?

Will it make things better?

Wish I was there

But do you care?

Life is such a struggle

A brief affair

It’s truth or dare

So to you this note I smuggle

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The Poetry Pirate – a previous evil act of low morals on the high seas

I found this one in my drafts.

Fuck it. It’s old, irrelevant, and not very good.

But I’m posting it anyway.

I realised today that my attack on Ivor yesterday was not the first instance of such wickedness. I stumbled across another such reported incident of over a year ago, and I publish it again here by way of confession, particularly as I seem to be under fire this morning over matters of questionable morals …. and this is something of a low water mark.

I admire poets. I read a bit of poetry here and there from people who seem to know what they are doing. I can’t claim to understand all of it and it’s hard, sometimes, for me to tell the difference between the poetry which goes way over my head and the poetry that just doesn’t make sense. I was never good at poetry during school. But that goes for a lot of things …. Most of all, though, I admire poets for their bravery. The very best poems come from poets who are willing to hang their emotions out for everyone to see. Now, I don’t really know how to write poetry, but even if I did I just don’t think that I’m capable of such bravery. I prefer to hide my emotions behind a sort of slap-stick carnality. I read a poem from Ivor, here. I’m sure a lot of you are familiar with Ivor’s body of work and the deep well of emotion that he draws from. I was inspired by this one sufficiently to create an alternative version – not as any sort of competition but rather to indicate that I keep my own well of emotion tightly sealed, and that’s why, perhaps, I will never be called a poet ….

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I’m hot for you, baby …burning red

Want to rip off all your clothes

And throw you on the bed

You’re glowing like a beacon

And I’m seekin’ your heat

Going to lick you all over

Starting at your feet

Your love is like an ember

I remember, how you scream

I want to jump into your fire

My desire. So obscene

Am I infected by a virus?

Is it something I can catch?

I want to keep that fire smokin’

Keep it stokin’. Light your match.

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