More bad poetry

Fresh from discussing bad poetry with a friend (there is a mountain of it out there) I add more of my own to that mountain in response to Sammi.

It’s bad (worse than normal, even) but it is 66 words, as required.

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Wish you were here

So unclear

Where do we stand together?

One-night stand

I understand

Can it be forever?

You alone?

Should I phone?

Rather than a letter?

Is it too late

To communicate?

Will it make things better?

Wish I was there

But do you care?

Life is such a struggle

A brief affair

It’s truth or dare

So to you this note I smuggle

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19 thoughts on “More bad poetry

  1. Great poem, and great graphic about the parts of a letter! 😀 They have something like that on the wall at the post office, but it’s parts of an addressed envelope!

    I love the reference to truth or dare! People should play that more often, in my opinion. While drinking.

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      1. HA HA HA! Nude twister, oh my! 😀 Now there’s a poem! And the family that plays nude twister together stays together! 😀 I love rhyming twister with sister!

        Truth or dare would also make for a great poem! 😀 Oh, you know what else would be fun? Playing truth or dare with a lie detector stolen from the sheriff’s office. And yeah, with liquor too. Now that would be a real humdinger of a good time!

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