What is Poetry?

What is Poetry

But a quest

And a question

Without an answer.

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But, yes. Seriously. What is it? Anybody who bothers to read my mostly silly posts will note that I frequently resort to very simple little rows of rhyming lines in order to get attention. I’ve been doing it since I was about twelve and have never really grown out of it. I have never matured into a poet, in other words. So I am reluctant, for the most part, to refer to this stuff as poetry, though it does, by some standards, fit the definition. Just for the record, though, rhythm is far more important to me than rhyme.

But I am not a poet. I aspire to be one, perhaps. But not one who writes poetry. If that makes sense.

So I am a bit confused with stuff I read that just seems to be rows of lines with no obvious rhyme or rhythm but rather more defined by not being presented as prose. As though hitting the return key at the end of every sentence (or even mid-sentence, better still) and omitting a word here or there to add some obscurity transforms a page of words into poetry.

I’m sorry.

It doesn’t.

It might not be prose

But that don’t

Make it poetry.

Most likely though I am missing something. I would like someone to explain it all to me. I’m serious.

Have a look at this …

Three o’clock in February

All the sky was blue and high

Banners and bunting

And people bunched up between

Greetings and sadness

I did not write the words above. I wish that I had. Is it beautiful? Sad? Thought provoking? I believe so.

But is it poetry?

No, it is not.

It is, in fact, the very first paragraph of a book written by J.P. Donleavy.

With the return key interfering.

If I had actually written those words I would be some way to considering myself a poet. But I would not claim to have written poetry.

The Horrors of Isolation

This post is based upon recent experience. Upon returning from the US, I was forced into isolation for two weeks and, whilst there were certain aspects of the experience that phased me not a bit, there were others that were challenging. Kate posted a thing about masks featuring some cute puppy dogs. My response had very little to do with either. Sorry, Kate.

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I wear a mask, my darling

To protect you from my breath

It’s Covid Nineteen, baby

And it could result in death

We bathe in separate bathrooms

We eat a separate meal

I don’t know how much longer

I can cope with this ordeal

I haven’t touched you sweetheart

We’ve not even shaken hands

I’m suffering so patiently

But no-one understands

You know me so well, cuddle-pie

You read me like a book

Do you think there’s any chance

I might just take a look?

I’ve lost all sense of feeling

As separately we dance

I’m lost for words, but may I ask

Could you please lose your pants?

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Here’s one I prepared earlier

This one came via My pal Stoner and was written in response to hers, which you definitely should read. I won’t try to make excuses this time. I’m lazy. I try to squeeze as much as possible out of 5 minutes thought.

I am floating past your doorway

I am whistling with the breeze

I find my way through crevices

To invade your space with ease

You smell my skin

Let me within

Your passion chasing fear

I can’t be there

Yet touch your hair

I whisper in your ear

So unclear

You feel me near

Appearing in your dreams

Not waking. You are shaking

You are breaking. So it seems

I fill the room. I linger

Trace my finger

Down your spine

I desire. And conspire

To one day make you mine

What does ‘like’ actually mean?

I post some garbage on here, let’s be honest. But I still get ‘likes’.

I mean …. really??? I don’t even like it. My own mother (who was embarrassingly biased) wouldn’t even like it. It’s rubbish.

That said, it is sort of lovely that people hit the ‘like’ button when maybe they actually didn’t. I’m touched.

What disturbs me more is the idea that people may be just randomly hitting that button without even reading my crap and thus rendering the whole concept pointless.

So here is a test. Here is something dull and talentless … but heartfelt.

If you do actually ‘like’ it … or even if you think it’s crap – don’t just push the ‘like’ button. Make a comment. Be honest. I can take it.

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Don’t say you like me

If you don’t

Don’t promise to do

What you just won’t

Perform. But please

Don’t just pretend

To be my lover

Or my friend

Reform. Don’t sell me

What is sold

Don’t confuse

A man so old

With stories that

Have been retold

Don’t touch me

With your fingers cold

With lies that you have

Told before

Just be straight

Tell me the score

But don’t mistake

Don’t get me wrong

If you enjoyed

My little song

Like me

And I’ll like you too

Love me

And I’ll love you true.