A poem about somebody who’s definitely not me (as far as I can remember).

For Sammi’s challenge

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Got up late

Not feeling great

For her not feeling ready

Head’s a mess

Heart under stress

Legs a bit unsteady

Yes, it’s true

A drink or two

Perhaps a few too many

Spent too long

On wine and song

Spent my every penny

‘Tis my fate

That she’ll berate

Me for my old obsession

It’s not my fault

But she’ll assault

Me for my indiscretion

And then I’ll say

“Not me! No way!

I didn’t touch a drop!”

She’ll yell and scream

To let off steam

Eventually she’ll stop.

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90 words. That’s a lot for me. I probably should go and lie down now.

4 thoughts on “A poem about somebody who’s definitely not me (as far as I can remember).

    1. I can’t really remember if they were good old days or just yesterday. Or maybe I really am talking about someone else. I used to be someone else once, though never really someone at all – at the same time ….

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  1. Is this you confession?? 🤣—like someone caught in a cycle they know too well but can’t quite escape. The rhythm makes it almost playful, but underneath, there’s something heavy—regret, inevitability, maybe even exhaustion.

    I can feel the tension between guilt and defiance, the way denial becomes reflexive, even when the truth is obvious. The back-and-forth between indulgence and consequence, between the drink and the aftermath, feels painfully real.

    It makes me think about how easy it is to justify our own vices, even when we know they come with a cost. And how, sometimes, the hardest part isn’t the mistake itself—but facing the person who’s tired of watching us make it. Whelp!

    Thankful for only 90 words we may have heard more of this confession Mr Richmond, I love war stories, I have a few of my own I may unpack on my next write 😊

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