Why do I keep doing this?
It’s difficult to be precise about these things but my own assessment is that this is my worst effort thus far. I wait patiently now for the judges to confirm that opinion.
It is supposed to be Historical Fiction/Redundancy/A Money Lender
Richmond Road 
This is a tour de force, sir. Don’t you DARE go all toe-in-the-sand awshucks at me, this is an amazing piece of writing.
It has structure, pacing, a certain wry humor (not unlike Robert Parker’s characters), and a sense of reality. Bravo, bravo, bravo.
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Judy … thanks … I have just penned a letter to the NYC Midnight people to lobby for your immediate appointment to the judging committee.
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I’m cool with that, and thank you. =)
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Probably my fault, but I can’t see anything when clicking on the title
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No … probably my fault. I’ll take a look
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How about from this page? https://theworldofbrutus.com/nyc-midnight-challenge/
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lol good one pops, great writing, totally enjoyed it and knowing a few VVs quite believable … enjoy that surf 😎
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Sadistic, much?
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Brilliant writing! Love the structure of the story, the detailed account of the events in Vietnam and later in the bank. The characters, their physical description and their behavior are well-studied. I also like the little touch of humor in the story.
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