Predatory Behaviour

Nortina’s #1MinFiction for this week is “won’t take no for an answer”, and here is the proof.

I’m beginning to think it should be “Naughtina” ….. is she trying to lead us into deep dark waters?

I only had a minute. That’s my excuse.

Girl we’ve come so far
To be together in this bar
And you’ve seen that I’m not much
Of a dancer
And I’m not your sort of guy
I’m normally too shy
Not normally a fast advancer
But fast I’m getting old
Outside it’s getting cold
I think you might be my
Last chancer
So you’ve really gotta know
That we’ve really gotta go
And I won’t take no
For an answer

8 thoughts on “Predatory Behaviour

  1. Haha! “Naughtina”… To anyone with a strong Southern drawl, that’s how my name is pronounced already! 😉
    I gotta say. The speaker of this poem is quite the smooth talker. A “yes” just might be in his cards!


  2. Hi,
    So you’re a poet. I admire you. I used to teach poetry. I wrote a rhyme or two when I was younger. Not easy.
    I met you at Nikki’s Meet and Greet with a Twist she held last weekend.
    Maybe you can check out my blog if you need any blogging tips. That’s what I write about. I also have Meet and Greets like Nikki. I blog over at Nice to meet you.


      1. And I did. You are obviously a master of the trade! As odd as it may seem I am not really trying to increase the traffic to my own, so-called, blog. It’s nice to connect with a few people and share thoughts but, for me, it doesn’t go any further than that.
        On the other hand, it might be nice to pretty the place up a bit …. keep the house a bit tidier and maybe leave a vase of flowers on the table from time to time. So I will keep an eye on your place.
        Thanks again.

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