
Not drowning, waving. So not sinking, really. Just saying hello. Hi.
It’s actually hard to tell if I’m headed upstream or downstream. Either way I’m not getting anywhere. But is there anywhere to get?
Anyway, I keep stumbling over little bits and pieces that I must have done in the past and, looking at them in the present, I cringe.
So I try to repair them, normally by adding something, when subtraction is actually what’s called for.
Here is an example ….
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Love lives in a castle of paper-thin walls
On a boat on a river approaching the falls
We head for the rapids, from there see the end
The paper is fragile and yet we pretend
That the walls stand forever and the river flows on
Though the structure is crumbling and soon will be gone
The walls will collapse and the boat will capsize
One last tender moment, one more look in your eyes
One more touch of your skin, one more taste of your breath
Whatever has life must one day face death
Dip a hand in the river, feel the cool of the stream
Feel your life start again as you wake from the dream
Love’s an illusion, a trick of the light
Love lasts forever, but just for one night
But love is a moment we cannot regret
Love is a gift. Lest we forget.
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I am thinking that the word ‘life’ could be exchanged for the word ‘love’ in this piece, and perhaps the world would be a better place if we always thought of those words as interchangeable.
Maybe I’ll do another one tomorrow. Why not? But also …. why?
The old romantic in you cannot be hidden thank heavens- and wouldn’t that be a dream. come true
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love and life interchangeable … grand idea pops! Would improve our world greatly .. liking this one
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Thank you Kate. Compliments from you are to be treasured.
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lol geeze you must be going mushy in your old age pops … thanks 🙂
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