More Silly Verse for Kids

This time for Sammi, who suggested 21 words about the ocean.

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This rolling bed, an ocean

Where my dreams might gently float

There to sweetly drift

Through starry nights upon a boat

6 thoughts on “More Silly Verse for Kids”

Anonymous

Lovely – a very calming piece 💕

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December 18, 2023 at 06:55 Reply
1. Richmond Road
  
  So kind of you to think so!
  
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  December 18, 2023 at 11:43 Reply
calmkate

too sweet!

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January 16, 2024 at 06:33 Reply
Chel Owens

A great start; I think you could go a whole picture book from these 21 words.

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January 29, 2024 at 18:12 Reply
1. Richmond Road
  
  Yes. Any book that I am involved in will need to be highly reliant on somebody else’s pictures…
  
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  January 29, 2024 at 18:58 Reply
  1. Chel Owens
    
    Only because they will need to be a higher standard, to complement the text effectively.
    
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    January 30, 2024 at 01:20